rate_review Reviews

Cute.

God, that really was some fine piece of art!
I really love the ending, thanks a lot!

Well, I must say I am HAPPILY impressed. You\'re very witty and funny and the romance wasn\'t half bad either.

All in all, WELL DONE!

I\'m going to check out if you\'re written anything more. If you haven\'t you SHOULD! If you have, then I very much look forward to reading more of your work.

Cheers,

Lorett

Absolutely adorable! I simply loved it! You managed to make a D/Hr seem realistic without all the angst that you\'d expect. Plus, the sex scene was amazing, how they both held onto their characteristics. I loved all of Hermione\'s comments, especially when she got pissed off at Malfoy because of the pain. It was a ton more realistic than Hermione suddenly talking dirty her first time. I also enjoyed the way you worded certain things. My favorite example would be the \"unexpectedly something\" paragraph during their first kiss. You use a ton of great, unusual metaphors. And to finish off my review.. the ending was absolutely adorable! Yes, I admit to squealing a bit. You should definately add more to this.. keep up the Harry jealously bit and make a real juicy love triangle. Great job!

wow! that was great! cant wait for you to continue!

I didn't really get the ending. Were they friends? Great story though really excellent wng. ng.

*Gasp* That was incredibly romantic!

awwwww. update soon please =)

Please please update soon!!! I've been waiting.

Ah, a most intriguing start! Pity the bowl shattered before it could have been used for more delectable usage though.

Hope you'll post the 2nd part soon!