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October 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I loved it...At first I was a little unsure and then all the sudden I couldn't look away. Tears ran down my cheeks as I read the last line. I loved it!
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October 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful!! That was such a beautiful story.
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September 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Exquisite. He was so... Draco.
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September 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow... Really well written, both beaytiful and sad. Love Maya and Her Dragon
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August 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
A-M-A-Z-I-N-G!
That...was... Gah! Wonderful... I think I almost cried at the end...it was wonderful! Spectacular job!
~Tips
That...was... Gah! Wonderful... I think I almost cried at the end...it was wonderful! Spectacular job!
~Tips
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August 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awww....*sniffles* This is so sweet....slightly creepy, but still sweet. Very well written and if you had any mistakes, I was too enraptured to notice, and I'm normally a grammar nut. Bravo! Sequel, perhaps? Hermione's POV, mayhap some "complications" from their night together? *evil grin*
-jo
-jo
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August 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was a touching story. It had a sad ending, but it was good. It kind of reminded me of a story I read where she kills him at the end as well, but they didn't just make love only once. They had a secret relationship throughout their seventh year and then she became an Auror after graduation and he a Death Eater. She kills him in order to spare him from being humiliated by the Aurors and she tells him she loves him before she says the killing curse on him. Anyway, great story. Adding it to my Draco/Hermione Literary Collection. ;)
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August 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow...that was intense, but beautifully written... I loved that her smile was hte last thing he saw. Well done.
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August 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow
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August 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story. I love how you build it from Draco's POV through the years. The lyric quality of your writing paints a distinct picture in my mind.
Wonderful job!
Wonderful job!