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September 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WAHHH!!!!!
Now that I've cried.
Great story. It's very emotional and tragic. My heart aches for Hermione, Draco, and everyone else. The knowledge of the great loss of what could have been makes me want to cry.
Poor Draco! Poor Hermione! Poor children!
Now that I've cried.
Great story. It's very emotional and tragic. My heart aches for Hermione, Draco, and everyone else. The knowledge of the great loss of what could have been makes me want to cry.
Poor Draco! Poor Hermione! Poor children!
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September 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Woah.... that was so sad, but I couldn't stop myself from reading it. It just pulled me right in and I couldn't stop if I wanted to. Rape is a very hard topic to talk about, as is a situation of one being held captive, but what you wrote really showed how some people's minds work. Draco, knowing that he was messed up, was showing his love for her. Hermione was doing that by crying and staying with him even when she wanted her freedom. All in all you did a great job with all of the description and relationship background information.
You're a good writer.
You're a good writer.
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September 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Definite ouch-factor in there. Could definitely use some fleshing out and polishing, but I *really* enjoyed it. Thank you for writing.
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September 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
very touching.....espcially the last 2 paragraph.....*sniff sniff* nice written story....
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August 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh! That was amazing! I'm so sad right now, but I love it. It really makes me resent the fact that I can only write fluffy stuff. I want to be deep, thoughtfull and angsty too dammit!
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August 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey there....your story is really touching....and i was reading with a smile on my face...you are a very good writer...keep it up and good luck :)
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August 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely loved it. It was very well written. Keep up the good work and continue to write more. You can go really far with your writting. Best of luck.
Angel #4
Angel #4
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August 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! What more can I say? This is absolutely beautifully written. I think I really enjoyed it because it just seems so very real, like something that could definately happen in the future... I'm a definate Draco and Hermione shipper, they are just so damn cute together... I hope to read more fics by you soon...
-Forever_yours-
-Forever_broken-
-Forever_yours-
-Forever_broken-
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August 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow, that was a really interesting story... It was kinda depressing in a way, but I thought it was also beautiful... Keep up with the writing.
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August 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story is excellent and I truly hope you consider expanding it into a chapter story with more detail.