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for The Raven

by BreeMcGregor

person azulkan2
schedule November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Glad to see you survived the storm. Hoping RL gets better soon. Looking forward to the next update.
person Barbara
schedule November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the update. Hopefully will be able to read more soon.
person Anon
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AN UPDATE!?!?! Omfg. YAY! Thank you!!
person DawnEB
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
An update! I\'m so glad you are continuing with this. I can\'t see it being too long into the summer training before the raven comes hopping around Hermione\'s window, if that near kiss is anything to go by. I look forward to the next chapter.
person gizmama
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yah! An update! I have loved this story and I hope that you will update again very soon!
person Catpower
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve just read the first 12 chapters in one go. I thought at first that this would be a predictable romance but it seems you are putting more and more in as we go along. The mirror thing is fascinating and there is great potential in Harry, Hermione and the Weasleys\' training month. I actually like the fact that you are taking your time about getting HG/SS together - time for tension to build up. I\'m also really enjoying your writing style - the descriptions and speech flow really well. I am able to forget I\'m reading and get lost in the story.
person Severessa
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am very sorry to hear about your trouble with Katrina! I cannot imagine what it was like to be in your place; I am fortunate enough to live in an area that doesn\'t have much more than an occasional tornado. I am thankful that you were not hurt, and I hope that your life gets better soon. Thank you for the update on the story; it is one of my very favorites.
person Jennifer
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM

Good chapter. I\'m glad your ok.
person Catpower
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Looking back through the reviews I realise I read some of the earlier chapters before and left a review. Ha! No wonder I found the story predictable at first! Please don\'t leave it so long before you update that I forget I\'ve read it yet again and write a review saying \"I like this story but it seems just like some other stories I\'ve read before\".
person droxy
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yaya an update! Will Hermioen ever figure out the raven was Snape?