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for The Raven

by BreeMcGregor

person Empress
schedule August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I read the blurb and started reading your story. In all honesty I wasn't expecting much. But you've truly got a strong story with characters that aren't OOC and infused with such real feelings and emotions. Thank the Lord I was so nosey that I found your fic. You've made my day!
person Robin
schedule August 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like how you made Snape and Hermione interact with each other.
Your doing a real good job keeping your characters in charakter ;)
I am waiting for Snape's reaction when he learns that Hermione knows of his 'little problem'.
Hermione will have to learn Occlumency, won't she?
What means that Snape will see some memories during the first session until Hermione learns to block him; what is he going to see?
Or what is Hermione going to see of his memories if something happens like in the OotP?
Will you write about that or are you going to skip that?
Well, I just have to read :)
person Megan Consoer
schedule July 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person jclairem
schedule July 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i hope you add on soon! i REALLY like where this story is heading. everyone's practically in character so thumbs up there. keep it up! Cheers, -JCM
person dreamsofroses
schedule July 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely adore this story! it's marvelously written.. i can't wait for the next update!
person Sinful
schedule July 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
what about Him being the crow? You didn't touch on that. It was the reson she was so shocked in her mouse form when she saw him as his animal form. It was why he petted her until she fell asleep. Are you going to hit on that in the next chaptrer. I want ton know what goes down with that. Besides that chapter 15 was a great chapter. Spane BLushed now that was something worht reading. Keep up the good work i love the story it's one of my favorites.
person Jennifer
schedule July 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am totally loving your story! I would love to be notified when you update, if that is possible.
person julianna
schedule July 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I Absolutely love this story- i'd really like to print it out, but i'd like the author's permission to do so first- if you wouldn't mind emailing me? i'm not sure if the email i entered already shows up, so i'll put it again- deviously_me@hotmail.com Hope to hear from you soon!
schedule July 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter!! :D
person pinkwands
schedule July 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ohh good chapter!!! love where you are going with HG hehe love that Sev is a dirty perv *giggles*