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for The Raven

by BreeMcGregor

person GEmory
schedule September 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Glad to see Ron out of the picture romantically. I have to admit he's not my favorite character. In hiw own way, he's as prejudiced and arrogant as Draco. I wonder what aspect of Hermione's future Dumbledore intends to work on. LOL
person piloo
schedule September 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It's a wonderful story. ron is a total git... even worse. So i hope you will update soon because i wonder what reaction snape will have toward hermione or ron !
person ancientgirl
schedule September 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
THAT TOTAL BASTARD!!!! Ugh, she should have hexed his balls off! I hope she doesn't plan on forgiving Ron for this, but it was nice to have Severus come to her rescue even in the form of a bird. I hope he's not hurt too badly though. Please don't keep us waiting too long for another update, this story is wonderful.
person rema cyphers
schedule August 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i am really loving this story, and i cannot wait for the next chapter. if you would like a beta reader, i would be more than hapy to oblige!
person Littlelo
schedule August 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Avery charming story! I do hope you'll continue it. I can't wait to see what happens! :D
person ChevyBaby
schedule August 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying this story, hope there'll be a new post soon :o)
person alexica evenstar
schedule August 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
THAT WAS SO CUTE, SNAPE FINALLY REALIZES WHO SHE REALLY IS I HOPE FOR LOTS OF ROMANCES IN THE FUTUER IT ROCKED THE HOUES AND WEASLE GETS HIS HA HA HA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Shiro Ryu
schedule August 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like your story! You have a few mis-spellings, but, your story is creative and flows quite nicely. I look forward to your next chapter! ^_^
person mariteri
schedule August 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Love it. Keep writing!
person ancientgirl
schedule August 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I can't take this. This story is just so wonderful!!!!! I'm a bit scared though since eventually Hermone is going to have to know that this Raven is Severus. I'm hoping she doesn't feel betrayed or anything. Anyway its not like anything is Severus' fault, he's a fucking bird! He can't talk to her. LOL, I think its cute though how they are both becoming such a formidable pair. Pleasd don't keep us waiting too long for an update.