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for The Raven

by BreeMcGregor

schedule November 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
How sweet of Hagrid to offer help :) I liked this chapter :)
Will Snape transforto hto himself soon?
person Loki
schedule November 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Love your story thanks writing it PLZ update soon!!
person cdkobasiuk
schedule October 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
5 great chapters. This is the first Adopt a Snape that I've enjoyed. Very good writting and an very nice plot.

cdk
person GeekGoddess
schedule October 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think your story is awesome...the only problem I see is that you don't update as much as I wish you would...then again thats not really a problem because your story is marvelous and I look forward to your next update.
person Anon
schedule October 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
awwww poor Hermione!
person Rosalind
schedule October 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Good stuff here. I like it alot. I think Severus is just about the best thing since well... ever. I some how figured out a long time ago just by observation that if he was to be an Animagus he would make a wonderful raven or at the least..a black panther all sleek and silent and powerful.. I hope the "mushy" stuff will be just as good as this is turning out to be.. Keep up the good work!
person droxy
schedule October 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
snape jealous of a cat, and what was in the fudge??
person laurie
schedule October 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for updating The Raven Bree. I've missed this story. It's a great story and I loved that you had Snape wishing he was huggable like Crookshanks.
person mariteri
schedule October 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You updated! Ahh, yes! Thank you! Good work and I hope to read more soon.
person alexica evenstar
schedule October 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
THAT WAS GREAT,I KEEP COMING BACK TO THIS STORY TO SEE IF NEW CHAPTERS ARE IN, NOW THAT IT HAS KEEP IT UP ITS GETTIN GOOD HOPE SNAPE LOVES HER ENOUGH TO TELL HIS SECRECT ONE DAY AND IT WOULD NOT HURT TO GIVE MIA[MIONE] AN ANIMAGUS FORM TO THIS STORY ROCK ASS.