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for The Raven

by BreeMcGregor

person alexica evenstar
schedule January 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
TTTTTTHHHHHHHEEEEEEE BOMB AWSOME KEEP IT UP KEEP IT UP, WE NEED OUR GIRL TO HAVE ASS KICKIN MOVES AND WANDLESS MAGIC.
person DArk topaz
schedule January 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
update
person ancientgirl
schedule January 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey, thanks so much for getting another chapter up. I\'ve missed this story. I almost fell out of my seat when Severu/Raven fell off his perch!
person robin
schedule January 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh i am so glad you are still working on this fic I love the plot and i a looking forward to reading more.
person Elphie
schedule January 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Update I love this story. When is Sanpe turning back???
person Rainny
schedule January 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh cute little chappie. I hope you update soon.
Well done!
schedule January 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved it indeed, read up to chap 7
UPDATE please*pulls at his red hair* I am waiting here!

Ohhhhhhhhhh I can hardlly wait for Snape to get his snarky mitts on the Weasley trio and Draco and unleash the Crustius Curse on them until they bend like reeds in the wind, if I had my way I wouldf put the Weasley trio in a position where they would have a 90% chance of THEMSELVES getting Raped, that will knock sense into them DEFINITELLY or Maybe Snape can simplly Avadaka Kadavera them Both or all solutions seem viable to snape


But then again with dumbledores irritating fault of looking the other way to Griffindor misdeeds *Shrugs*


Anyway I like what is written so far, dark yet hauntinglly enrapturing , Snape as the dark misunderstood enigma and Hermoine as the wronged one is enchantiong indeed
person Anon
schedule January 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this has to be one of the better Hermione/Snape pairings that I have seen
person daygonna
schedule January 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
its so great to finally have u update! i had thought ud given up! i hope that since things r working better that ull update again and soon! ill be waiting. ur still doinf a great job writing by the way
person larana
schedule January 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!!!! please post more soon :)