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for The Raven

by BreeMcGregor

person roguefyre
schedule July 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
CONTINUE!!!!!!!!! I am looking forward to finding out exactly how well Hermione mannages to control the mirrors, as well as how she and Proffessor Snape draw closer. I am also looking forward to reading about her reaction to Snape being the raven.

By the way... what exactly made you name the raven after a demon? Just curious.
person RLM
schedule June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please update this fic...i was really into it, but it hasnt been updated in a while
person Melissa Merrick
schedule June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Update!!! I can\'t stand the anticipation any longer. This is by far and away my favorite story online!
schedule April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 11 ...........Interesting indeed. Pity the impotence wasn\'t PERMINENT!!!
Snape is indeed in control ogf his temper. had a snot nosed kid did what harry did toSnape to my person. They wpould find a size nine boot uip their arse or in their groin HARD!
person droxy
schedule April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay an update!! I didnt see it. Normally you update on ashwinder. So Ron is out of the way. Hope a kiss is coming soon....
person azulkan2
schedule April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Glad to see the update. Will be watching for more. Hope RL doesn\'t tromp to hard.
person cdkobasiuk
schedule April 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aw come on a over protective Harry is just too sweet.

cdk
person JTBJAB
schedule April 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A shame it is so short, but school etc is more important *despite what my soul tells me, my brain is right*

As long as we have another update sometime soon, short or long, im sure everyone will be happy!
person JJ
schedule April 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW! WOW! WOW! WOW! WOW!!!! If you study as well as you write, you\'ll ace your exams! That was a wonderful story! Well plotted, excellent characterizations and details. Your writing is smooth as well, but I will admit some of the typo\'s make it rough. I wonder if the movement from one server to another is bad. Your characters are pretty true to the cannon. I love how we get to see a more forceful side to Dumbledore, most just talk about his twinkle. The bond between Severes and Hermoinie will be very important in the future, I bet. So much is going right in your story that I\'ve become one of your loyal fans and look forward to more story!
person ChevyBaby
schedule April 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Don\'t apologise for the length, I\'m just happy to have an update for this fic. I really enjoy this story and hope it\'s not going to be too long before the next chapter arrives :o)