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August 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
haha i love this story!!!!!!!!!!!! it have all i love: draco\harry and M.R.!!!! i will die if you dont update soon!!
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February 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yes. have reviewed befor. i love this fic.....it\'s a comfort fic for me....one i read hen i feel....i dunno. really wish you would finish this tho. a lot.............it\'s one of my fave\'s ever...........and acording to most people have read every good harry/draco fic out there. please put me out of my misery
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December 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
you really, really really should finish this
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October 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I luv this story! Moulin Rouge, Harry/Draco slash...*sigh* I must be in heaven. Pleaze rite more soon!
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September 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
please update soon
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April 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I have to say that this is a good story. I was sort of confused at the end of chapter 1 when you put in a dialogue between Harry and yourself, but then I got it and laughed. Now, that bit about Petunia and his uncle raping him....dirty, dirty, sick, very sick. Not even the concept, yeah, that too, but more the way you described petunia\'s lips around his little penis. uhh! And then when you threw Dudley into the mix, the killer whale mind you, mm-mm *shakes head*, that was just nasty. And then Voldemort! ahh!! You\'ve got one interesting mind there. Wow. Keep up the good work and please write more chapters soon. I haven\'t something this twisted since Ungodly Affections by MrsSnape and you\'re beating here when it comes down to the plain twisted idea. GREAT WORK. PLEASE update soon!!!
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April 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is actually pretty good! No offense meant, but some of the D/H fics I\'ve read aren\'t so good--you know, horrible grammar, totally out of canon, etc.
If you can bear to take criticism, then read on. If not, just take this review as a compliment.
One thing I\'d advise you to do is to get a beta reader-I\'ll volunteer if no one else will. You have small grammar mistakes scattered throughout the text--things like double capital letters, or a misspelled word. Things that can be quite small, but together, it can be a bit off-putting. Or, you could just read over your work yourself. Either way will do.
If you can bear to take criticism, then read on. If not, just take this review as a compliment.
One thing I\'d advise you to do is to get a beta reader-I\'ll volunteer if no one else will. You have small grammar mistakes scattered throughout the text--things like double capital letters, or a misspelled word. Things that can be quite small, but together, it can be a bit off-putting. Or, you could just read over your work yourself. Either way will do.
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March 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Aww! so sweet! Harry & Draco like each other *squeals* its so exciting!!
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March 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ignore your Harry-muse. I want slash.
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March 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I loved it! * glomps lily