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June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this! And that little convo at the end with u and Draco and his father made me laugh soo hard!
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February 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
When I read the story it just felt wrong reading it and now I am finished I think I should have stopped halfway through. I just believe it si not right to have a father fuck his 8 year old son...and I don\'t think it can be an excuse to say it\'s a fantasy only.
It is just sick and the thing is it happens so there should be no outlet, not even in fantasy to use a father fucking an 8!!! year old kid (which would for sure be injured both bodily & mentally), a turn on.
It\'s just wrong and I definitely should not have read it, but on the other hand the story should not have been written & published at all in my opinion.
It is just sick and the thing is it happens so there should be no outlet, not even in fantasy to use a father fucking an 8!!! year old kid (which would for sure be injured both bodily & mentally), a turn on.
It\'s just wrong and I definitely should not have read it, but on the other hand the story should not have been written & published at all in my opinion.
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January 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Um. damn that was like.. so friggin hot.. That was just fucking amazing.. man... wow... Um.. yeah.. I mean There aren\'t many fics out there that can cause me to want to take a cold shower..s o yeah.. take that as a huge compliment there. It\'s so damn dirty and wrong but hell it\'s so good!
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January 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lovely fic. Very nice and steamy. I rated this a five star fic but I did want to point out a few things:
I was nibbling his nipples them were red as strawberries, them taste so sweet, each time I liked them Draco moaned louder, It should be each time I licked them Draco moaned louder.
Also because of Draco\'s age and him not hitting puberty yet his orgasm would have been dry. No need to change it in this fic because the transition is very smooth as it is but perhaps something to remeber for future fics.
Do not take this the wrong way as it is merely constructive criticism.
If you are ever in need, I do a little beta\'ing on the side. Feel free to contact me if you would like.
Cheers!
I was nibbling his nipples them were red as strawberries, them taste so sweet, each time I liked them Draco moaned louder, It should be each time I licked them Draco moaned louder.
Also because of Draco\'s age and him not hitting puberty yet his orgasm would have been dry. No need to change it in this fic because the transition is very smooth as it is but perhaps something to remeber for future fics.
Do not take this the wrong way as it is merely constructive criticism.
If you are ever in need, I do a little beta\'ing on the side. Feel free to contact me if you would like.
Cheers!
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August 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
um...very hot
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August 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! Have you slightest idea how horney I am now? GOD DAMNIT!!! *Reads it again.*