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for Perfect Things

by whitehawk

person Flash
schedule August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
plz plz plz plz telll me thiz won\'t b ur last draco/harry story i think pointless forever and perfect things havce been the two best stories i\'ve ever read on this web site plzz don\'t stop writing these fanfictionssssss!!!! and update soon
person Nony
schedule August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Am still loving this story!
person thrnbrooke
schedule August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Evil cliffhangers! I need chapter 12! What is going on?
person somekindofberry
schedule August 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I appreciate that you want to get some tension back into the Harry/Draco-ness - but did you have to make Harry so bloody stupid at the same time? To even consider listening to a Slytherin after what he\'s gone through (not to mention his conveniently forgetting Draco\'s declaration of love) just smacks of plot-device and idiocy. Draco\'s final thing - to sacrifice himself to Blaise\'s sexual whims just to keep him away from Harry - erm ... odd. To say the least. His bottoming for Harry was significant - even though you haven\'t even brought that to Harry\'s attention yet - and offering to bottom for Blaise ... just ... cheapens that. I mean - he\'s a Malfoy, he\'s been a perfectly wonderful manipulative Slytherin for the entire story so far ... and yet as soon as he falls in love, he gives up on it? As soon as he\'s found \'the one\', he\'s willing to give up Harry, give up his \'gift\' to Harry to Blaise for the foreseeable future, and not once think about how to kill/permanently dispose of Blaise? It\'s just weird. Is he on drugs or just wildly OOC? Is Harry on drugs for listening to Blaise? I suppose you\'ve given yourself an \'out\' by having Blaise *not* fuck him in the corridor outside Gryffindor House ... but really? Just because Pansy made him promise? Why would we believe that such a bastard would keep a promise? I have to say ... I really wanted to stop reading this after chapter six. Why, you ask? Because I saw so much potential for *this* type of scenario ... Harry and Draco would have enough problems being honest with each other and trying to have a relationship, after the way they got together. (\'I\'ve Never\' was an expected situation really - your readers were waiting for the hammer to fall ever since Draco performed the polyjuiced deed.) I guess I\'m just wishing I\'d stopped now, before it got too strange. I hope you redeem it with your next chapter though ... *lives in hope*
person Calena
schedule July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn, Blaise is such a bitch! Come on Harry/Draco... get it together!
Loving your work, btw, update soon please.
xxx :)
person sbkar
schedule July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Truly I hate manipulative bastards, and Blaise is climbing to number one! Please, have someone start messing with him!!!!
person Pureblood
schedule July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Please update soon! That last chapter was so depressing! I actually almost cried...Please update! I want to know what\'s going to happen to them. PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I will love you forever!
person nony
schedule July 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
whoa. what a bunch of conniving teenagers.
person thrnbrooke
schedule July 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh this isn\'t good! Can\'t wait for chapter 11! Wonder when Harry finds out the truth about everything?
person thrnbrooke
schedule July 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Everyone was in on it? Including Oliver? Oh I can\'t wait for chapter 10! What happens next?