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by whitehawk

person lily anderson
schedule July 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
"My fingers are tingling, my throat is dry, my eyes are burning."

-FFVII
person PoisonedSugar
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was really good, and since you mentioned Blaise wanting revenge, is there going to be a sequal? PleasePleasePlease? *puppydog eyes*
person scully
schedule October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
what a completely bizarre tale! I am glad i dont live in your head! haha you are definitely a slytherin! i could hardly keep up with all the plots and revenge and who was allying with who for which plan! deviousness abounds! yeah, i felt a little sorry for blaise there at the end but ah who cares at least harry gave draco another chance. lets hope draco doesnt fuck this one up! hahahhaha
person Crazy Devilish Angel
schedule September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow! I know I\'m late with reviewing but the last few weeks (or more months lol) i didn\'t had time to read much, so i tried in between, but yesterday i just had it and printed out all the chapters i hadn\'t read so far, and read it out right away! :) I loved it, i really liked this story, and there have been times i flew up all offended or angry haha. Its good you\'re going to edit some though, because I can see some grammar mistakes and word mistakes..i knew exactly what you meant, but sometimes you picked the wrong word ;) (don\'t get me wrong, I\'m dutch myself and make mistakes all the time) but i thought if you\'re going to edit this i might point it out! okay a question: Are you going to let Blaise take revenge? because i really DON\"T want that! lol i don\'t think Draco can stand much more, the poor guy :D I am hoping you will write more stories, because i find this one very interesting, i loved it when draco became blaise with the potion and how he acted so jealous, marvelous! I wouldn\'t mind a continued story to this one, but blaise is done, i feel so bad for h/d already! Anyway, I\'m ordering you to continue writting and hope to see something interesting yet again next time :) *claps* good job! xx Angel
person Crazy Devilish Angel
schedule September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh and btw, did you have to let Ron come of so greasy? lol I love ron so much, he\'s a cutie...now he even made me feel disgusted when Draco kissed him...ugh!
Oh and are Ron and Harry ever going to be friends again?
:)
xx Angel
person thrnbrooke
schedule September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh I don\'t want this to end! I want a chapter 13! I\'ve gotta know what the future holds!
person evila
schedule September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW GREAT STORY !!
I LOVED IT !
person roxierose13
schedule September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was a bitter sweet ending. I normally like Blaise, but you made me hate him! Good job though, developing the characters that much. I think the end didn\'t have much closure though, are you gonna add a sequel? Good job, again!
person eLiz
schedule September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was evil of u :K. HOw could u let us hanging like that? I NEED 2 read more. Peace Out.
person somekindofberry
schedule August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I so hate Blaise in this story - but thank you for ending it the way you will! If you\'d ended this chapter one paragraph prior I would still be hating you - but how can I hate you when you\'re about to make it all better? Looking forward to the final installment.