rate_review Reviews

This is absolutely brilliant. The only thing that really didn\'t fit in terms of POV shifts was the shift to Harry during the Final Battle... it didn\'t seem to fit. Not that it wasn\'t a good scene, because it was.

Great moments: the revenge of Fleur, Malfoy informing Hermione of her failure, riding into the jaws of death...

And a side note: as I listened to the battle in Diagon Alley, \"Long Way Down\" by the Goo Goo Dolls was selected by my MP3 player. When Hermione went back to make her changes, \"Change\" by Tears for Fears was selected. Serendipitous.

I\'d like to say I want a sequel, but to be honest, some things are best left as single volumes. This works better as a completed work.

So write something else, dammit! Just not a sequel.

This is a wonderful story! You did well with the time travel. The chapters you added are great additions that flow very well with the rest of the story - I can\'t imagine the story without them. The fight scenes were great - I\'ve never been able to write battle well, so I praise you for your superior skills. When Bill dies - Fleur\'s French is just heart-wrenching. In all honesty, at the end, I wanted Hermione to be pregnant, regardless of how trite or how cliche it might be. It\'s a great way to end the story. I would love to see a sequel.

Great story...I have to mentally catch my breath because it moves so fast.

Chapter 10 is cut off too.

!!! Where\'s the rest of chapter 5?!!!
It breaks off in the middle of a sentence in the middle of the attack and, given where the next chapter picks up, there\'s obviously a big chunk missing.

Anyway, I\'m loving the story so far, especially your characterization of Draco. Hermione has been a tad less impressive so far, but maybe that\'s just my aversion
to the \"He kissed me!\" melodrama that appears in so many fics. But that\'s a minor complain, and all signs indicate that I\'ll be compelled to finish the story in one sitting.

I was planning on reviewing once I got to the end of the story, but I couldn\'t help but want to give a review now! This is a very interesting fic- and what I like is how you portray D/H in the scope of the war, while including the war in detail as well. A lot of authors who write post-hogwarts with D/H tend to leave the war vague. The volatile, dangerous, and even tragic D/H you portray here is great. Now, I must go read more! *scampers off*

wow i am really enjoyin this story , the plot is brilliant and so much detail, aswel as it bein a DM/HG fic what more can u ask for

im glad that u started updated on a reguller basis,im reallly enjoyin this fic cant wait for the next chapter

im glad that u started updated on a reguller basis,im reallly enjoyin this fic cant wait for the next chapter

Glorious, glorious and tragic and breathtaking. The additions you are making are adding so much more depth to this story. Trigiriginal version was (and still is) my favorite Harry Potter Fic, but this version truly astounding. Brava, my dear, brava!