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October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow!
That was incredable! Really bloody fantastic! I honestly don't think I have ever read something quite as good as this, it had me on the edge of my seat the whole way through. I just adore how everything was explained, everything made sense. There were no red herrings so to speak, which is a rare thing in Harry potter fiction beacsue it is just so hard to do.
It was just a truely beautiful peace of writing!
I LOVE IT!
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That was incredable! Really bloody fantastic! I honestly don't think I have ever read something quite as good as this, it had me on the edge of my seat the whole way through. I just adore how everything was explained, everything made sense. There were no red herrings so to speak, which is a rare thing in Harry potter fiction beacsue it is just so hard to do.
It was just a truely beautiful peace of writing!
I LOVE IT!
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January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Brillant ...Just brillant! That's all I can say I sat and read this whole thing in one sitting.....This goes on my recommend list! Thanks for the great story!
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November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I had to pop in and review this. I found it over on the dhr_ficsearch on livejournal and recalled that you once reviewed one of my own stories and had a nifty knowledge of every good Snapefic ever written. It was odds on that this would be good and it is. It's very good. Extremely good.
As far as concrit goes, I can say only that you really jumped us feet first into the deep end of Draco crushing on Hermione. There are a couple of bits that are about as clear as mud, eg; what memories she saw. I have the impression that both will be cleared up eventually, however, which makes it not so much concrit as a reader's mental notes.
Your sense of timing and pace is brilliant. That pause before shooting a line at us, like this chapter's begining where Hermione says, "UGH." It adds a great deal of zest. The one-liners and inner monologues are snappy and highly amusing. It all flows just perfectly. Love the tension, love Moody and Kingsley. I'll probably add a few more reviews as I keep reading.
As far as concrit goes, I can say only that you really jumped us feet first into the deep end of Draco crushing on Hermione. There are a couple of bits that are about as clear as mud, eg; what memories she saw. I have the impression that both will be cleared up eventually, however, which makes it not so much concrit as a reader's mental notes.
Your sense of timing and pace is brilliant. That pause before shooting a line at us, like this chapter's begining where Hermione says, "UGH." It adds a great deal of zest. The one-liners and inner monologues are snappy and highly amusing. It all flows just perfectly. Love the tension, love Moody and Kingsley. I'll probably add a few more reviews as I keep reading.
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November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME I LOVED IT I LAUGHED I CRIED ...IT WAS KICK ASS
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October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow!!! That was great. I couldn\'t stop reading and i had tears in my eyes so often. The time travel element didn\'t bother me but that might be because i play Role play games a lot and we have a GM ( GAME MASTER person who is in control of the plot and non player characters) that just loves time travel and alternate realities, so i\'m so used to it not it makes sense :).
Anyway thankyou for the story it was really well written and i hope you keep writting.
Anyway thankyou for the story it was really well written and i hope you keep writting.
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August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please please make a sequel i just lov e this story i cryed when draco die and i cryed some more then she saved him by giving him the mark i just cant waitin till you make a sequel or another story you are a goor author keep up the good work and in till next time later
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May 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
First of all, I really loved the ending! I think it fited well with the story. i just loved the story by the way.
As much as I would wish for a sequel I doubt that you are writing one so......
Great job one of the best H/D I
As much as I would wish for a sequel I doubt that you are writing one so......
Great job one of the best H/D I
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April 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It\'s the author, again. Apparently, my poor story got all torn up in the last site crash. It\'s been fixed, and thank you, thank you, to my many reviewers. Your comments are invaluable whenever I start to wonder if I\'m taking the story the right way or not.
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April 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooooooooooo...love, love, LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Just read the whole thing straight through.
It\'s bloody brilliant.
Just read the whole thing straight through.
It\'s bloody brilliant.
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March 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh My God.
I\'m still reeling. Wonderful, amazing, gut-wrenchingly awful... It was brilliant.
All of the utter *cliches* you often find in fics - bonding, time travel, pregnancy, love conquering all, many deaths while the Trio live on... weren\'t contrived or yak-worthy in this fic. You justified all of it. Never once did I think suddenly (as I often find myself doing) \"oh, yeah RIGHT\". Happy to say I was not choking on the fluff or dodging badly-written plot twists coming out of left field.
10/10
Well done. Keep \'em coming.
Gypsy
I\'m still reeling. Wonderful, amazing, gut-wrenchingly awful... It was brilliant.
All of the utter *cliches* you often find in fics - bonding, time travel, pregnancy, love conquering all, many deaths while the Trio live on... weren\'t contrived or yak-worthy in this fic. You justified all of it. Never once did I think suddenly (as I often find myself doing) \"oh, yeah RIGHT\". Happy to say I was not choking on the fluff or dodging badly-written plot twists coming out of left field.
10/10
Well done. Keep \'em coming.
Gypsy