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October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting twist. Great start. More, please!
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September 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
when can we expect the next update?
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September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good start, but many more chapters are needed. Write more soon, please.
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August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please email when the next chapter is in and please update soon you made it sound very interesting inthe first two chapters sp i hope to see how this ends.
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July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Can\'t wait to read more! HURRY! LOVE IT!
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April 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I enjoy your story , and looking to read more of it.
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November 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think the idea is very good but you have to polish your writing
Continue updating
Continue updating
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September 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well your chapters are too short, but I think this story has plenty of promise, so just getaround to finishing it.
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August 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Reading this makes me want to pour acid onto my eyes so that I'd never have to read anything this shitty again for the rest of my life. Worst. Story. Ever.
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August 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This looks like it could be a really hot story keep up the good work!