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by draconisdemented

person hartbreak
schedule September 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow, this is good. ohhh horrible cliffy's. haha. i can't wait till the next chapter
person Amo
schedule September 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhh! Still wonderful... And where is Hermione? What's going on with Harry? When will you just off Ron and put us out of our misery? And will Fred'n'George get with Padma? Please? I need more!
person TrixRStrange
schedule September 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Got to love the cliffhangers!! This FF is one of the best that I've run into on this site. I can't wait for the next chapter and have told everyone of my HP fan friends to read this FF. It's awesome!!
person Misikoru
schedule September 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ooh ooh ooh, I just spent the last four hours reading your entire story and I can't wait for the next chapter. I absolutely love this. and do me a favor? Pwetty Pwease? Make sure ron and Harry don't make through the story alive. Those two are awful gits and deseave what's coming to them. Arigato and keep up the great work!!
person Hartbreak
schedule September 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
omg this is sooo freakin' good. u have HAVE to update SOON! i hope it will be ginny/blaise/draco and padma with the twins. It'd be a bit cliche to have it with 4 people. Padma's cool. im so hooked to ur story. haha. this is like the first timed i've reviewed on this webiste. you have to update soon. i loved ch 8 it was so good. haha. ur story is awesome. and pls update soon!
person lily_lioness
schedule September 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE don't make Padma their lover!!!! Don't add her to the ginny/draco/blaise love story line!!!!!! That would just kill everything!!!! NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO pretty PLEASE!!!
person lily_lioness
schedule September 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh and that was amazing!!! I'm def. loveing it!!! And p.s. make padma be just there good friend, ooo and loveing the torture of Harry very nice!!!!
person Dryad
schedule September 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Totally unexpected twists and turns. I completely relate with Hermione...i simply can't get around slytherin logic...but damned if i'm not a bit envious.

You've made the slytherins believable characters within the realm of slytherin...I'm enjoying this now more tbefobefore...more realistic and not quite so fantast...t...though i guess you needed to go through that to get to here...

but its still one of my favorite stories!

Dryad
person FlipFlopCrush
schedule September 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG! you cant just stop there wow major cliffy, more chapters!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person FlipFlopCrush
schedule September 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Another thing don't make Padma there lover- good friend, and also wuts up w/ Hermione? And Ron blargh is he bothering me, Harry 2! OMG? What will Sirius do?