rate_review Reviews

hey. i just love your story. the thing is though, that i\'ve read it before, and i think that its missing some chapters. like right after the polyjuice potion wears off and ginny is ginny again, in the old version that i\'ve read, ginny then explains to blaise and draco why she is there...but in this version, it skips that and goes onto when draco and blaise relaised that they love each other. and when draco, blaise and ginny go to talk to harry, hermoine, and ron, there is susposed to be a part where, blaise and draco leave the room and start making out and are seen by a first year and scare her, but thats not there either. there are a lot of chapters missing and so the story has holes in it. if you could fix this and e-mail me when its fixed, that would be great. i really love this fic. but it needs to be fixed. thanks.

Chapet 21, Yuletide Cheer, is missing

I really like this story! Chapter Twenty One is missing but besides taht teh story is amazing! Please post soon because i will be waiting for what will come next!

-Davina-

I love your story! Your french is really funny, but even speaking french I have to read the english translation to understand, the program you use isn\'t very good. ch

don\'t bother with the french if you can\'t speak it. i understand that you want blaise and draco to sound elite, and that perhaps that would help. but you are butchering it far beyond belief. surely there is someone you can ask with a basic knowledge of the language that could explain that a conjugated verb is necessary to form a sentence.

also, by this point, i\'m honestly not sure what the hell the plot is. do you have an ending worked out yet? because this all seems totally pointless.

you need someone to check your french for you. that question about \"my mother\'s middle name\" should have been something like \"qu\'est-ce que le nom milieu de ma mere?\"

this story is sooo freaking intrusting! i think i love you for writeing this

what happen? why are they friends? god, i\'m so fucking confuse

I\'m CRYING!!!!!!!!!, I hope you know that.

i hope you haven\'t forgotten your story, it\'s wonderfully written. please up date soon