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by draconisdemented

person Melissa
schedule October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Omg! I am in love with this story and I\'m only on Chapter 10! I swear I get nothing done now and I probably won\'t untill I finish this story! I spend so much of my time reading it lol. Anywho, I luv you for the Blaise/Ginny/Draco thing because, frankly, I don\'t think there are enough of those stories on here lol. Also, I like the incorporation of the gods in there, it\'s soooo interesting and exciting to read. But, I thought that I should bring to your attention a few glitches with the story, don\'t worry! Not the story itself, but there seems to be a glitch in the system or something because in chapters 6,7,8 and 9(and this is only so far) there seems to be jumps in the story, like chunks of it are missing, like when they deal with that hell demon or w/e. it cuts off at the end of the chapter and I have no idea how Ginny, Blaise and Draco got those marks that link them to their god or how they were \'chosen\' because its not even in there! I was so upset lol because it\'s so amazing, the whole thing, the plot, the pairing(or trio, whatever), the whole damn story! and peices are missing! lol anywho, I would luv you forever if you could check that out and try to fix it or whatever because I really want to know what happened!! lol. So other then the glitch in the site, you are my hero and I now worship you lol
person Cac
schedule July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh YES! I LOVE finding stories that I think I\'ll like, that are long, that are already well under way or completed. And I really like this one! (Dark look) Just hope you don\'t diapoint me...

Ok-ay, yummmy yum yum, can\'t wait to get back to it so why the hell am I talking to you? Ha.
person Cac
schedule July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Right... typical that I leave a reveiw like my last one and then end up not liking the story after all. sigh
person Cac
schedule July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, like Anon above said, I clicked chapter two and wondered if I accidently went to a different story or something.
person Anonymous
schedule July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
person Anon
schedule July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Parts I have read form basis for an excellent and original story.

However it seems that every second part has been accidentally deleted or was never uploaded as there are large discontinuities between parts.
The plot always jumps forward between parts leaving significant holes in the story.
(For example: In the first part G is spying B&D but in the next part they have obviously been together for some time.)
person Ann
schedule June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to let you know that there are big chunks missing from this story. I started reading it here but got so confused about what was happening but I liked the idea of the story enough to check it out at FF.net. After reading it there, and filling in the gaps, I really like your story. You might want to try to fix the missing chunks so that other readers won\'t get confused.
person Psi
schedule June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey i know this story! Dracademented are you going to post more of its sequel on FF.net ? Please do I still love your writing.
person Amanda
schedule June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG...i read your story first of fanfiction.net and absolutely fell in love with it. I think i told you that there but i can\'t remember. Well, i love your story. I read it all the time. I even have it saved to my Favorites list. You\'re a brilliant writer and you convey everything so brilliantly it\'s all so exquisit. I love your writing and i love you as an author. You\'re brilliant babe. Keep you spark and keep doing what you do, you do it oh so well.

Your devoted fan-Amanda
person Amanda
schedule June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey Henna LEAVE OFF! People make mistakes. It\'ll be alright, and she\'s not butchering it. You\'re butchering her! SO LAY OFF!
Girlie, you just keep on doing what you do. And i think the french is a wonderful touch to the story. It does make them sound more elegant, but it\'s also positively romantic. So just do what you want to do.

-Amanda