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by draconisdemented

person Kat
schedule May 22, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Hi, I love this story so much! I read it years ago, and just recently found it again. I had a question though - it seems like it's different... have you changed anything?
schedule October 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM







"Who are you?" Blaise repeated. "And what the bloody hell are you doing in my body? And snogging Draco, at that?"

"He snogged me!" Ginny said without thinking. Draco snorted

LMFAO


and aww ginny always liked blaize and draco?cute


"What brings you so foolishly into the heart of Slytherin, little Weasley?" Blaise asked,
love the sentence

"What an absolutely thrilling welcome. Please tell me you don't greet everyone like that."



"Never, darling." Draco replied, sliding off of Blaise and intertwining their fingers. A wave of his hand, and they were clean and unruffled once more.

haha

i dont like how its a month later....i wanted to know what happend that night

"You know," Virginia said, and their eyes flashed back to her. "For two pampered, lazy bastards you can move awfully quickly when you want to."
lol


"What the hell was that?" Harry questioned, speaking up for the first time as warmth began creeping back into the room.



"Gee, and here I was thanking the gods that you'd forgotten how to speak." Draco snapped sarcastically
lol
person Ingi22
schedule August 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i remember readin this when you only had a few chapters up but stuff happened and i couldn't use a computer for a while and i forgot about this site. aaaaanyways, i came across this site and wanted to finish readin it but the chapters are only half there!! the first ginny/draco/blaise scene is gone :(
you HAVE to fix it puh-leeeeeaaaaaaaaaaase!!!!
person Pyratica
schedule December 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You are evil!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Nooooooo!!!!!!!!! Bad cliffhanger!!!!!!!! Authors*throws hands up in exasperation* can't live with them can't live without them... You better get the end posted soon or there is going to be trouble!*glares mumbles about needing to learn how to threaten properly* I need to go talk to Isaac(my lichen he's evil not really but we let him live with his delusions and he makes it seem like he is) he should be able to help... hmm... anyway loved the story but it skipped a lot and there were a couple typos i just couldn't get past cuz im a grammar geek when reading anything...post soon!!!!!!!PLEASE!
person danielle
schedule October 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey i was absolutly enthralled with your story and toatally loved it your a great writer and did a wonderful job with it. thank you for writing something long and entrancing i enjoyed it keep up the good work :) (cause i just love ginny, draco, and blaise it made the story even better lol) laters
person WitchyWiccan
schedule October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You have to update soon! I need to see how this ends. Great story!!!
person Cat
schedule September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story first off, but it seems like parts of the chapters are missing. It reads like places just aren't there, like what ever Draco and Blaise's mums did to bring them back, yeah not there though the info on the different deities are. Also, parts of words and sentences are missing. Could it have been from the site reformating or what ever they did? Just thought you'd like to know. Even with that though I do enjoy this story. It's my fav pairings all rolled into one!
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, I'm going to ff.net to find it because this place has done a serious butcher job here. Huge chunks missing! I hope you are able to fix it because it's a great story and it would be a shame for others to miss out because they can't find it over there...
person erin
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The story seems really good, but there is a problem with the chapters, sections are missing. I was wondering if you could fix them, please, so I can fully enjoy your story.
person Anna
schedule November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The story seems really good, but there is a problem with the chapters, sections are missing. I was wondering if you could fix them, please, so I can fully enjoy your story.