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for Beneficent Stranger

by Titania

person Anon
schedule August 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapter?
person Fairyp80
schedule May 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this story but I was a little confused in chapter 6 when she talks about severus playing golf with daddy. I thought the reason she had a benefactor was that her parents were killed and she was left broke.
person Megan Consoer
schedule July 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Sunflower
schedule December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story I LOVE IT! But I might point out that it is Fawkes not Falks. But besides that it is a great story and I cant wait for more!
person firewall
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good, I'm glad there are a few more chapters to come. I'm enjoying the lightness of this story. I'd hex anyone who called me cupcake, too.
person kac
schedule February 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Enjoy your writing and hope you continue this. Just one note... premise is that Hermione has lost her parents so \"golf with daddy\" section of chapter 6 should be revised.
person Atropos
schedule September 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. It is beautifully written and I can hardly wait for more.
person Tarotgoddess9
schedule July 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please tell me that there\'s going to be more! I really like the way this story starts, so please let it have an ending that\'s just as sweet!