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July 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Are you sure this is just your first D/Hr PWP?
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July 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was hot! I really enjoyed the smut and the characterizations. I adore the idea of Draco and Hermione attending university after Hogwarts.
You had a few errors regarding your tenses (switching from past to present often in the same sentence). These could be fixed quite easily with a beta!
Good work!
You had a few errors regarding your tenses (switching from past to present often in the same sentence). These could be fixed quite easily with a beta!
Good work!
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July 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like fluff. Good job. ^^-
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July 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You won\'t get a bad review from me for fluffy endings. Lord knows there\'s enough crap we have to deal with in RL and its nice to read something that makes you feel good even if its just for a little while.
Are you planning on continueing this. It works as a one shot very well, but since you put that beginning there at the end I was just wondering.
Great little story.
Are you planning on continueing this. It works as a one shot very well, but since you put that beginning there at the end I was just wondering.
Great little story.