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for Hit the Floor

by lilysunshine

schedule November 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was wonderful. I really like how you handled both their relationship and the war. Those two story types can be hard to juggle afterall. I'm not sure I liked the characterizations of Hermione and Ron at all times, but I can definitely understand Harry's actions against them, for them and himself. Wonderful job.
schedule September 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Just brilliant - I absolutely loved this. Fantastically written, plausible storyline without straying to far from the orginal character make-up. Excellently done, I couldn't ask for a better story :)

(And all was said and done in only 10 chapters or so - so it didn't drag on forever, the perfect amount of detail and no rambling monologues that could have been ommitted)

Incredible.
person Ihni
schedule November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved it.


And that's all there is to say, really. I could go on and on about details ... but it would only lead to one sentence:

I loved it.
person Purple-er
schedule October 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM

Smooth read. It's one of the few Harry-Draco fics that is
really believable.
person insane songbird
schedule November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story was just good.
I'm sad, it's over so soon.
They changed a lot, but still are the same. You did a great job about this and I really have to say it will become one of my favourits.
bye, birdie
schedule November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
\"Draco walked up to him and placed a hand on the back of Harry
person Gene McKeever
schedule August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a fabulous story. Thanks for sharing!
person Angel Sukoyo
schedule July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i believe that \'Hit The Floor\' is one of the most beautifly written fanfics that i have ever read.
person Meg
schedule March 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I love that story, It was beautiful just needs to be looked over cause theres some mistakes but other then that its awsome.
person Dragenphly
schedule February 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is lovely. I\'ve always loved the \'Harry gets lessons from Slyths\' idea, and I especially enjoyed the way you\'ve executed it. The relationship between Harry and Draco is very realistic, and I enjoyed the story as a whole very much. Keep up the writing!