rate_review Reviews

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

When I read this, I had an interesting reaction. It seems, almost to have a different voice than the other. \'She\' was presented as very open and unashamed, where as \'He\' is almost tentative in emotion, perhaps because of length and word choice. This is not meant as a criticism, just as observation. They are both good.