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I truly hope you continue

Continue

I love this story, please continue.

I really hope echo and draco work out.

Very good chapter.

Could Moira go to the Dark Lord and try to bring about Draco's downfall, or Echo's death. Then Draco, Brandon (Please more Brandon and Hermione action), and Harry Potter could go about sitting the world to rights. Is Breena old enough yet to have caught Harry's attention.

I've enjoyed the story. Hate you are having writers block.

YOU!!!! YOU!!!!!! I REALLY HATE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I NEED TO KNOW WHAT IS GOING TO HAPPEN, PLEASE PLEASE, I AM BEGING YOU TO UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE, DON' T BE MEAN AND EVIL, I NEED IT SO BADLY. JUSTJUST DON'T UNDERSTAND ME, I NEED TO READ MORE CHAPTERS, PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!! HOW DARE YOU TO GIVE ME SUCH A STORY, IT IS WONDERFULL, AND NOW YOU TAKE IT AWAY FROM ME LIKE THAT, I VISIT ADULTFAN.NEXCESS.NET EVERY DAY TO CHECK IF YOU HAD UPDATE, AND NOTHING, NOTHING FOR TWO WEEKS, NOT EVEN A SIMPLE MESSAGE TO TELL ME WHEN ARE YOU PLANING TO UPDATE. I DEMAND TO HAVE AT LEAST TWO CHAPTERS FOR THE NEXT WEEKEND, IF YOU DON`T I WILL SCREAM AS A BANSHEE. HEY I MAY BECOME A BANSHEE, AND I WILL CHASE YOU FOR EVER, SO GIME MORE CHAPTER SOON. WHAT DO I HAVE TO DO? WHAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! COME ON JUST ONE OR TWO MORE, IT IS VERY SIMPLE, YOU WRITE AND I READ, AND WE ARE ALL HAPPY FOR EVER AFTER, PLEASE ANSWER ME AND KEEP WRITING.

ALWAY YOURS, LADY PASSION

Good!--No answers yet but good. A little suspense is good for the soul.

I wanted to name our daughter Jessie Jane. (Female version of Jessie James) My husband objected. I hated his "Boy" name so we compromised. Her name ending up being very feminine. She does technical tree climbing, rock climbs, hiking, basketball, Karate, and she's just getting interested in motorcycles. Filling out her medical history forms is fun. Her orthopedic told me last time he would give her a larger size boot so if she broke her ankle in the next year or so it should still fit.

I sometimes wonder if Jessie Jane wouldn't have fit her personality a little better.

Oh yea! Cudos on going back to school with kids. I really should, but I can't seem to make the time. I think a career change right about now would help me. Emotionally if not fiiallially. I guess I've got the almost 40 blues.

i just ran across your story last night. it definatly doesn't suck the balls off a what? llama? anyway it's interesting and though it's a little uneven in style and the occasionally ooc, you have originality and the multiple plot lines are still clear. congratulations on keeping on without a beta and duing f***ing college exams. I'm doing them again too.
looking forward to the rest of the story.
teacherspet

Very intriguing story. Hope to see an update soon.

OK. No B S' ing. This is one of the hottest current stories going. It has a plot, it has suspense, It has decent sex scenes (I'm waiting patiently for my favorite couple of Brandon and Hermione.) It has bastard, but caring Snape. Lucius with almost a heart and a sexy Hermione. Your new characters are so well developed that I have a definite picture of each of them. Bethany, going to be a handful and eventually get Potter, Brandon could either swing dark or light but he will be powerful, and Echo is mysterious. I don't have her figured out.

My only request. Don't kill Severus off if you can help it.

I'm just a little confused. Did the girls hear that Snape was Brandon's father?