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by loola

person alatariel aldarion
schedule August 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! i really hope you're continuing this, it's utterly hot^_^
person Ringbearer
schedule August 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was HOT. That was the hottest sex I\'ve read in a good, long time. I was squicked by the anal stuff, as that does nothing for me, but everything else was VERY, INCREDIBLY, HOT. Also, I love the fluff! To me, hot sex is made even hotter when there are real, loving emotions involved. Please write more!!
person amy
schedule August 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
\"She had never filleted a man before, and Hermione hoped she was pleasing Severus.\"

Fillet - To slice, bone, or make into fillets
Fellate - To perform fellatio on

One would only hope she had never filleted a man before, the whole process sounds rather painful ou aou ask me. ^_~
person S. Grey
schedule July 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Irony is a lovely thing.
person Jayne
schedule July 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOO WOO MORE MORE MORE
person firestarter
schedule July 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
love it!
person mariteri
schedule July 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nice smut. Oh yeah. But you know for you to throw in the \"I love yous\" you needed more history. It came off as being sappy because of that. But the story was good, and I do believe the sex was smut-tastic! Good job!
person underthisumbrella
schedule July 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That\'s some good smut! What plot? ;)