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by daphnemyst

person Sannashi
schedule July 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Pleas I realy want to know what will happen...

Pleas update

Kizzez and huggz

Sannashi
person Shippa
schedule August 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You will update now. I have to know if Snape (sniffs) dies or lives. I'll be very sad if you don't let me know what happens.
person Christmas
schedule July 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OHHHH! That;s sooo wrong...I checked every day to see if you updated...and then you leave me on another cliffhanger...*tear*...i'm sad...
person LOVE
schedule July 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love the story, but personal problems are more important than updating!!! Never fear we will be waiting when you're ready to update!
person Christmas
schedule July 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I couldn't stop reading this...It was so...fantastic! I wanted to cry when Sirius came back and Remus dumped Severus just like that...before you even said anything I was furious at Remus, yelling at the computer screen, trying to tell Severus that he didn't deserve him...that he was too good for Remus...that he shouldn't play second fiddle to him...I kept thinking, 'man, Remus is a bastard!'...and then...I had an ounce of hope when Remus couldn't have sex with Sirius, and how he said Severus' name after transformation...and I was angry at him...but not furious anymore because he did have feelings for Severus still...and I kept thinking Sirius is an asshole...'if you love me, you'll have sex with me' is all I could hear in my head and I wanted to kill him for it...how Remus hurt Severus so badly also...and how Sirius actually had the audacity to try and stop Remus from Severus when he was DIEING for god's sake...and I was furious...AND THEN...the cliffhanger...Oh! I thought I would die...it was glorious! I can't wait for what happens next...PLEASE DON'T KILL SEVERUS!! I mean...Sirius dies anyway in book five...that's just next year in your fanfic...I know devastating...okay...*sigh*...do as you please...freinds at least...just PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE have Remus and Severus together...usually Remus is in my favor more...but Severus...(through your story)...has won me over...even if I already loved him...I love him so much more...with a deep passion...well done...I don't even know what to say anymore...and by the way...PINK AND PURPLE!!! Did you choose the gayest colors for Dumbledore to wear??? *smirk*...Dumbledore was never my favorite character because I thought he meddled in others' affairs too much...but still...Pink and Purple...lol...

Christmas
person MiladytheWinter
schedule October 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please go on!!! I love this story!!
person QueneArual
schedule October 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I don't really care for SB/RL, but I LOVE SS/RL. If Severus is dead I'll have to hunt you down and kill you.
person qfapo
schedule September 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So, here's my review! :)

Well, what I liked most of this chapter is, again , the relationship between Remus and Sirius. Sirius is definetly more inmature than Remus, and I love that I'm able to see it in the way you write them so, again, good job ;)

About Severus being injured... Well, that's not the sort of thing I usually like in a fic, but I suppose it will be useful for the plot later, so I won't complain about it :P

I'm curious to see how will Remus do to ma dec decision now... And how will Sirius react to it whatever the decision is, of course.

And now I just have to say one last thing. I can't help to think that Remus and Sirius are always better together :P:P:P

person jes
schedule September 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is a great story
you have to update soon please!!!!!!!!
person ancientgirl
schedule September 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I'm breathing slowly now, trying to catch meatheath. Now I'm thinking you just can't kill Severus off, right? I mean lik liked this story so far even though I wasn't too crazy about Remus being with Sirius, but I'm thinking that Severus being hurt like this is just a catalyst to get him and Remus back together right?

Gosh, I'm almost tempted to stop reading, but I won't know if Severus and Remus will be together if I do, but I don't want to read if Severus dies. Now I'm all bummed out. I hate this.

You did a great job with the writing though. I have to say apart from being sad about Severus being in a coma and Remus sleepinth Sth Sirius, you did a wonderful job with the chapter.