rate_review Reviews

. . . That was so moving. Though it\'s a little unlikely that Petunia would be that concerned for Harry, it was a very well-written and thought out continuation of the fifth book. Harry\'s reactions and deamenor, and Petunia\'s curiosity were very believable. It was excellent.

this is a very sad story. it was touching and poignant, but sad, as i\'m sure it was meant to be. it seems to me that harry has just given up. it\'s like he was beaten. not sure i agree with that characterization. i just don\'t think harry would give up like that. hopefully he\'s just conserving his strength by not fighting against the dursleys so he can defeat voldemort. yeah, that\'s the ticket! i\'ll cling to that. hehe.

Excellent fiction giving a wonderful look into Petunia\'s thoughts! Thank you for sharing!

~Lisa

Very good. cant say mor cos im stunned

So very, very sad. Excellently written. You have really captured what Harry could be feeling. You have also done what JK Rowling has failed to do--develope Petunia and get inside her head. The flow between thoughts was very smooth. I hope you continue to write as well as you did for this.