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for Shattered

by Jacklyn

person Candy_Stick
schedule November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It has a good potential plot line but one of the main things that turned me off was that it was clearly un-beta'd. However, despite that it was a good start.
person HentaiZaru
schedule August 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMGOSH, you must keep on writing!!!!!!! PLEASE
person Aeolua
schedule July 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Please continue, realy love this story!
person twichy
schedule July 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WRITE MORE ...please...
person liquid_grace
schedule November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooooooooooooo i like more please
i love fic like this!
-lg-
person jeepers
schedule March 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
more........
update.
sends armies of plot bunnies to plague you.
person yaoiboydaisuke
schedule November 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
continue! i comand you!
person Katlien Maxwell
schedule August 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
more, more, more, more!!! please write some more i really want to know what happens to Haand and when Draco comes in... when can Vernon die? he really needs to die!! well so far this is a pretty good fic. please write some more! ^_^
person Carolyn
schedule August 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a really well-written story! I can't wait to find out what happens when people find out! just one comment, the story is wider than the page which means readers have to scroll back and forth across the page to read it, which is a little tricky and tough on the eyes, just wondering if there was anything you could do to correct that?Thanks, keep writing!
person neko-san
schedule July 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Loved it. I can\'t wait to continue reading. :)