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for ButterMellow

by MinakoAino

person ... ((or kitkattcassy))
schedule September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh! this ficlet is just absolutely bloody brilliant! and you've brought some delicious fred/george twincest in as well!.......ooh! are they going to go back to hogwarts and fred and george are going to persuade ron and harry to have a little fun with them? maybe they give it the guise of normal marauder-esque business, but then, when the twins get the two alone........well...........you know how it goes *grin*.........ooh, and what trouble is this that i feel brewing? mr and mrs weasley needeth the recorder? *shakes head in mock sypathy* what is to become of our newly-found lovers' secret? tsk, tsk...........why did those two delectable twins feel the overwhelming urge to videotape that wonderously sinful and dangerously erotic act between harry and ron? ((and would they mind sending me a copy?)).......lol........i just sounded like some creepy old lady-pervert *sheepish grin* that's what i get for reading these late at night when the 'rents won't ask what i'm doing........hmmmmmmm......soooooo..........you're thinking of continuing this muchly, yeah? i seriously can't wait! and will you feel abliged to do the scene of the twins in the treehouse? cause that idea seriously had my interests piqued...........mmmmmm..........i love fred and george muchly ^-^v........oh! i hope that my long review isn't making you mad.........i just can't help it........once i start typing, i have to type every little thing that passes through my head ((which is why my reviews oft times feel erratic, and my emails make no sense ^-^U.......well..........i hope that the yaoi gods and goddesses smile down upon you with inspiration, and you write more soon..........*hugs* ja ne and love as thou wilt!

-lurves, kitkattcassy
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=(^-^)= <---bunny rabbit for you! *huggles*
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person ... ((or kitkattcassy))
schedule September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
it killed my bunny rabbit!
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person Anon
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ahhhhh come on!!! update!!! ahh this is hottttt more!
person such_a_hentai
schedule May 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was great! i normally don\'t go for harry/ron, but this was good. update!
damn i love those twins.
person Paigey Wagey
schedule May 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey Hun!
Keep up the good work! Youre doing great! I hope you get that laptop soon so we all can enjoy your stories! anywho! Love ya hun! keep smiling and writing! Love, ~Paige
person katie
schedule May 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I loved it! FLUFF rox and so does your story. *poke* you need to UPDATE Midsummer\'s Night, dangit!
person katie
schedule March 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Please update, girl! Your story rocks, hurry up and update! you don\'t know who i am, but my name is katie and i\'m obsessed with this sotry. and I like midsummer\'s night, too. well, ttyl!
person Paigey Wagey
schedule March 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I Know exactly where this is going.....I cant wait till you post more chapters.....I to to know what happens next from where I left off........hehehe.....dont forget to add the mushroom into your story !!!! ^__^ Well, keep writing, Ive told you a million times that you rock at this shit, so I dont have to again....wait....yeah i can. fuck it. YOU FUCKING ROCK AT WRITING HARRY AS A LITTLE SLUT!!! Fnar. okay. well, I have to go to bed now at 4:44am if I ever wanna get my ass up for crew today, so ttyl sweetie!
Blessed Be,
~Paige
p.s. get your ass to crew on time today pleaaaaaase...... ^_~
person Skye
schedule March 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story so far! I can\'t wait to find out what happens next! Ron\'s embarrassment is so cute. Keep it up!

person Drew A*****
schedule March 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
HOW COULD YOU DO THIS TO ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You left it at a cliff hanger, just when, ya know. IT\'S ABOUT TO GET GOOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! So hurry up and update. Pleeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaasssssssssssssseeeeeeeeeeeee. The story is going really good. Hope to see it updated soon.
Drew