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for Unforseen Complications

by Raihne

person sak
schedule May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just found this story and it has so much potential. Snape dealing with the loss of a lover and a child while forced into a becoming a Death Eater spy--with Remus returning. Harry probing for the truth and wondering what that means and Draco having sympathy and wanting to try the potion Severus developed. Excellent potential for passion and conflict. I look forward to more.
person Priss368
schedule May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this fic! I find the characters to be so sweet & the story to be very touching! I bet Draco likes Harry! I wonder if you\'ll go into more detail about why the baby was stillborn? Maybe Snape could figure that out & improve the male pregnancy potion for Draco & Harry? Can\'t wait to see what happens next! Priss
person Rydia_p
schedule April 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I love this, more? You haven\'t updated your site either, what\'s up?
person Chys
schedule December 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like this story, have read others on your site and love the Anja series, especially how she relates to the gundam wing characters. I got into YYH because of that fic! Is there a way you can update that one soon?

I like your gundam wing ones as well, and the -chans are an adorable series! I enjoyed the perfect prize. I really liked beyond the bounds of time as well.

Are you going to continue your Love Build WK arc?

Hope your mother gets better, my own was in the hospital for a serious surgery so I can understand how much you would want her to get better and how that can affect your internet time, I couldn\'t think enough to get anything written while she was ill. Good luck in the future!

Chys
person Myrddin Ambrosius
schedule July 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey, you\'ve got a great start to your story. I\'d love to see where you go with it. I hope you decide to continue it soon.
person bwalsh
schedule July 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
A good beginning, I am very interested in finding out what happens next. Please update soon! Thanks,
bw