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for Unforseen Complications

by Raihne

person Vittani
schedule February 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So sorry about the last review i've calmed down now. This was absolutely beautiful, i've just read it from start to finish and i nearly died when i saw there was no more. This is one of the most refreshingly original stories ever, its serene, tranquil yet harsh and filled with so many misunderstandings. I knew something had to be wrong, Remus would never do anything like that. He didnt even know about the baby. This is so intoxicating and sweet, please update soon. Please.
schedule February 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I've soooo got to have chapter 6! This is fantastic!
schedule February 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Dumbledore is truly a meddling bastard, I dislike him very much. Severus shouldn't take Remus back for anything, he was and still is too damn loyal to Dumbledore, he'd be better off alone. That makes me mad how they treated Severus, no wonder he acts the way he does.
person NewJay
schedule August 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
-crys. Sniff- This is one of the most bueataful fan fictions I have ever read.
I dearly hope that you continue this story, for I am looking forward to reading the rest.
person Kris
schedule October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really dont like it when they get the guy pregnant spefically Professor Snape but I will love to say that this is an exception. It got me cry\'ing alot and I dont cry easily. I would like to see some more chapters up soon! Thanks for the read!
person sbkar
schedule June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
sniffle....
person Priss368
schedule June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The others are right, this last chapter was a tear-jerker! Wonder ful to read, but also sad. I find that the feelings/issues covered in this fic & particularly in this last chapter to be rather close to home for me as my hubby & I are experiencing infertility. Children are so precious & yet there are others out there that don\'t appreciate being able to have them!

I love the dialogue between the characters. I find it to be realistic & well thought out. You make them human-not one dimensional.

I can\'t wait to read more of this fic! It\'s wonderful!

Priss
person mysticsong
schedule June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow.
WOW.
WOWOWOWOWWOW.


This is really, really good. You ARE adding to it, right?
person sak
schedule June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was a hard chapter to read, to learn more what happened between Severus and Remus. Probably not easy to write as well with all the sadness. Nicely done and I look forward to reading more.
person acr
schedule May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Really interesting start! Remus and Snape? Interesting! Please continue!