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for Hangover and other secondary effects

by darkmoore

person mel
schedule March 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!!! But please don
person amanda
schedule March 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i am glad there is a new chapter up. hope to read more soon
person Becky
schedule March 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Glad to see you updated the story. I\'ve enjoyed it & look forward to future updates.
person Miki
schedule March 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh that is evil. just evil.... well at least he finally told harry how he feels so maybe they will both stop being prats and finally be happy with eachother.... i think harry should see the rest of the memory of that night. all the things they told eachother the love that they shared and then harry would understand that he does want him.

but i guess that would also make the story shorter. please update soon... it was so great really.

Miki
person Kat Potter
schedule March 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god! I love this fic! It is so good! Can\'t wait for more!
person miki
schedule November 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh that was so good. i hope they soon come to realise that they did marry for love and not just for the baby. sev loves him just as much as harry loves him. harry just needs to remember more of that night.. isn't there some type of potion that they could have given harry to make him remember that night again and the love sev showed him that night and told him as well... well i guess doing that would make the story end too quckly and not have the drama. Brilliant chapter as always!

miki
person Mara
schedule October 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Evil, pure evil! I love cliff hangers and hate them at the same time. I like how you are dragging out the return of the victory party my. y.
Will Harry find out that his Friends and Dumbledore coerced him into bonding? How will that pull Harry & Sev's relationship, which is already on tenterhooks?
person Solo's Ghost
schedule October 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE Update soon. I am really really loving this and I can't wai see see what happens next. This is such a great story!!!! When are they gonna realize they love eachother!!!! Can't wait to read more :)
person amanda
schedule October 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i glad the new chapter are up hope new chapter soon
person Deep Emerald
schedule October 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, yes!!! Tension, tension! Oh, how I love a story that weaves plenty of tension and wrench throwing into the mix! I have a hard time finding other writers who enjoy taking a situation and complicating things within it as they go. I love the whole idea of creating a situation, holding out some hope that things will work out then snatching it away again - holding out more hope then throwing another wrench in the works, turning everything on its ear - smoothing things over again and then throwing another wrench in. Well done! *claps hands* Can't wait to read more!