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... You did not just stop there! I want more and soon!!! I\'m sorry for being so childish, but I need my fix ^_^. Great fic; it\'s always appreciated when a story is well-written.

Gods! What a relief---Not a date rape, just a simple mix-up, Somehow an ill Harry winding up in the wrong room---perhaps one door over? And Sev leaving, acting in a way that a first time lover might take as not wanting to be recognized, And, poor Harry, thinkng it was a dream... now pregnant, thinking someone took advantage. Poor guys! Well, dringing and medsoften don\'t mix well...

Now it\'s almost out! Waiting to hear Harry\'s reaction to Sev eing the father---but, please, please, not toomuch more angst? He\'s already got enough---just let him know the whole explanation! After all, finding him in his bed, Sev *thiught* that he was the present being given \'in private\' and felt horrible when when he discovered otherwise! And, really, there\'s going to be to to pay when Hermione and Ron find out, anyway! But, I really am looking forwards to a happy family! And, oh, geez! What an important bit to leave out of the education of the mggleborn and muggle-raised!! Eek! Anything Else that they left out?!! Umm, are the Maloys going to play at all in this? Good, bad, relatives or friends of Snape? We always hear about Harry\'s friends reactions, I\'m wondering about Severus side.
This is a good fic, I am hoping that you have more done? Greedy that I am... Plus, this is quite the cliffie. Actually, a number of the chapters have been, it is only by the merciful fact that you have posted so many at once that I have not gone off due to cliffie saturation/frustration. It is Very good that you have not left us in agony!

I read all 7 chapter\'s i can\'t for the other chapter\'s to be add. great and awesome story please add more chapter\'s i want to find out what harry does when he finds out that it is snape\'s baby. what doubledore will do to snape when he find\'s out

ACK! Where\'s the rest?? I gotta know what happens! I\'ve loved this story thus far - please do continue it!

Ahhh!!! Next chapter! NOW!

Will Severus tell Harry? Will he just try to be there for Harry without telling him? I want to know!

Love it. I don\'t think Snape has ever fainted before that was so great

I am enjoying the story but there are places where you use the totally wrong word and it is very jarring. For instance, in the sentence \'How prospective of you to come here, when you could not get rid of that sickness by yourself\', I wasn\'t sure if you meant to use \'perceptive\' or \'perspicacious\' or another word like \'prudent\' which would have made more sense. Perhaps an extra read through during the editing process is in order. I am looking forward to more.

HOLY CRAP!!! This fic is so great!! But that cliffhanger (though I love the wait) was painful, Ouch! Snape fainted, thats so great. I am really enjoying this fic, It is very well written and also has a great storyline. Please update soon (I know you just did but Pretty Pretty Please, as soon as you can!!!) Thanks for writting!

That was great.... oh Dumbledore is so going to figure it out. he will be mad at first most likely but then Sev will explane.. and hopeful it will work out right? Oh i do like this story. They both love eachother but won\'t admit it.. and they have a daughter aww.. well hope you update soon.

Miki