rate_review Reviews

Absolutely great!! I really love the story!!
You might want to change \'the last time\' (last chapter) in \'lately\' or \'of late\' or another similar expression though. By my knowledge, \'the last time\', used as you do, is notrectrect english.
Is your mothertongue by any chance dutch or german? For your use of \'the last time\' in chapter eight seems to me awfully much like a literal translation of \'de laatste tijd\' or \'die letzte Zeit\'
Anyhow, keep on writing! Your story is marvellous and I can hardly wait for the next chapter!!

Kind regards,
Agnes

Damnit.......Sorry Why do you like to torture me? WHY?


Any way good chapter. : )

Please update soon.

Oh, you evil person! You can\'t just leave it at that! you hafta write more! please! write more!

Ich liebe diese Gechtechte. Es hat so viele Drehungen und Drehungen darin. Schreiben Sie bitte mehr.

Ohh, I love it ^.^ Great story!

Hey that was priceless! Can I get more please? I enjoyed it very much and would like to see more of it.

Loved it! More Please!!!!!!

Great chapter. I can\'t wait for Harry\'s reaction. Keep up the good work.

You are cruel....Leaving the chapter in \"that\" part.
I hope you can continue soon.

I absolutely love this story! I can\'t wait to see what happens next-Snape tells Harry it was him? Oh I just can\'t wait! Please,please, please e-mail me when you update!