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Oi !

This could turn out to be very very intresting now. Let the chaos insue!

Very good chapter! Please up-date soon.

Wahoo!!! I am loving ths story! Hehe! Keep Writing dude!

Hehehehe! that was just so awesome..... I love the idea of Harry being pregant, of course.

But I can just picture the look on his face when Snape told him... *snickers*

Hi this is Tazthedevilman from ff ..... I just found out you had 2 more chapters posted here so I came and read them ahhhhhhh that was sooooo good. I can\'t wait to hear harry\'s reaction to this hole ordeal . great story I love it.
thanks.

Lovely chapter, well explained, justifiable reasons---hope it continues along that sensible, yet caring line. But, you Stopped There?? Agghhh!
Please continue soonest!

ohmigosh, are you just gonna leave us hanging????????

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Update quickly, my love. ;)

Its good

I\'m really enjoying your story! I haven\'t been checking this site very often, since it has technical problems, so when I came back, I was pleased to see so many nhapthapters! I love that Severus finally told Harry the truth. I can\'t wait to see what happens next!

I wasn\'t \'offended\' by your use of the wrong words in your story and I\'m not sure how you got that feeling from my review even after reading it again. Perhaps the word \'jarring\' was too strong for you? But as an English writing instructor, I am used to teg myg my students how their stories affect the reader in general and suggesting ways to improve them. One mantra I use in my classes is edit, edit, and edit again. When I write, I edit several times and still have someone else do it for me - and usually read it over again after that. After I edit my student\'s stories, I have them go through and edit them again. I feel the editprocprocess is that important. Everyone makes misakes. And one thing, as a teacher, that I am a stickler about is using the corrext . I . I will admit that. I also told you that I enjoyed your story and was looking forward to more. Those are not the words of someone who is offended. Instead, I was trying to give helpful and constructive criticism. I am sorry if you were offended, it was not my intention. Since you seem to find my words harsh, and I don\'t want to make anyone feel bad, I won\'t review again but, I will instead wish you good luck. And keep writing.

YAY! Now they both know!!! Next chapter please... :)