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Ahhh, poor Sevvie. Harry's head's a bit off, isn't it? Hope he comes to his senses before it's too late to salvage a relationship.

I still love this story. LOVE IT, I tells ya! LOVE IT. LOVE IT, LOVE IT, LOVE IT. :) I should probably sign in when I review, so you can distinguish me from other 'Katie's who leave a review, but anyway. Too lazy for that. :) I still love this story. UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!! Please?

I am enjoying this spin on a Harry/Severus story.
Some errors I've spotted are:

"Do you understand what I say?" should be "Do you understand what I am saying?"

reflected versus de-flected...reflect would be bouncing back, like a mirror does with your image; deflect would shift the power --Ebony deflected the bludger's impact to affect her father.

This is a good story, Veilen Dank!

awesome storyline.. keep going at it mate!!!

Wonderful!! Extremely GREAT writing!!!!
I really love this story; Can hardly wait for the next chapter!!!
Keep up the good work!

Oohh Poor Snape...Harry is off his rocker.

It just gets be and and better.

PLEASE Up date soon. Please!

: )

Hey,


endlich einmal eine mpreg Fanfic die aus der Masse hervorsticht.
Ich finde es gut wie du Harry und Snape "leiden" l

Oh no! Severus is going mess things up!

OH MY GOSH OH MY GOSH OH MY GOSH, I LOVE THIS I LOVE THIS I LOVE THIS SOOOOOOOOOO MUCH!!!!!!! I wasn't going to read it for a while, cuz when I read the summary, I didn't think I'd like it that much, but today I was like "oh, what the hell" so I clicked on it, and it was the best choice I've ever made!!!!!! I was hooked from the first sentence. Well, maybe not the FIRST sentence, but you get the idea. I love this story so much. It's fabulous, fantastic, amazing, great, brilliant, sensational, exceptional, remarkable, fantabulous, and I couldn't be bothered thinking of any more words. :) I love this story. LOVE IT! Please update soon! Do you have a general idea of how long the story is going to be? How many chapters? Anyway, LOVE IT. UPDATE ASAP PLEASE!

lots of luv from a huge fan,

KTK!

Oops. I think I see a Harry Hissy Fit on the horizon. Poor Snapey. I don't think he sees this one coming! Great chapter! Nice characterizations and just enough doubt and angst in their minds to keep your audience on edge and uncomfortable while still wanting to see it resolved. Nice work!