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August 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
great fic i love every thing about it and your english is prefect
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August 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
great fic please keep up the good wprk and update very soon
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August 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
love you love your fic update soon lol short and to the point lol
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August 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i love this story please update soon and keep up the good work i cant wait to see what will happen next
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August 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is certainly a unique story. You might want to fix boot to boat and herd to oven -- it seems your German is peeking through a bit. Blessed be.
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August 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Just a little comment about verbs - a person remembers something they knew, but if it is another person bringing up the memory, then the other person reminds them what they knew. A lot of my German friends have difficulty with this because the verb is the same in German. Also, we usually say that parents have children or some form of to have instead of a form of to get. Just thought you\'d want to know. Your English is sooo much better than either of the other languages I have dabbled in and your creativityamazamazing.
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August 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
glad to see you back and i love the sex scene between them it was hot i wish he was mine or i could join them lol keep up the good work and update soon
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August 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
great job this story just keeps getting beter and better every chapter please update soon marry me lol
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August 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
you are great i have never read a more detailed story yet and i love it please keep up the good work update soon
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August 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i love this story ir is great and i love the way how you developed the relationship between AD/HG and didnot rush it great fic update soon