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February 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Bad? Too Bad? This is no were near bad... this is great for a first time and great even if you had written ten thousands of them before.
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February 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This was really good. It was very well written and injoyable to read. -Stephanie
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February 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was really excellent!! I liked how you didn\'t use their names until the end, and it was just Harry\'s name then. It was a good effect.
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August 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
For your first story, I'd say you did rather well. Keep up the good work!
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July 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like this! Very well written. :-)
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July 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a very good beginning! I know it said \"End\", but that was just an oversight, right? There are going to be more chapters to come to ain ain how Harry ended up in this position...right? That was my not-so-subtle way of suggesting that you continue on with this, by the way! Excellent for a first try and speaks of wonderful things to come!