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for \"Shadow\"

by Jessy20

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schedule August 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
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schedule July 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
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person Jessy20
schedule July 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
just cheking something..
person Sher
schedule July 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was a very lovely start, Irith. I like Emmanuel already :D. Making her not only a member of Slytherin, but Snape\'s own sister pretty much set the stage for mucho conflict later when she and Sirius somehow begin to grow closer. It seems to me like they share common ground already, they just have to realize that for themselves. I\'m very interested in seeing where you take this.

Hope to read more soon. Well done!

Cheers!
Sher