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schedule
July 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Not bad if you\'re an eighth er. er. If you\'re older, ack. I\'m deeply ashamed of the educational system wherever you are.
schedule
July 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good fic, just 2 points:
get it proofread
it\'s animagus, not animangus
apart from that, pretty good
get it proofread
it\'s animagus, not animangus
apart from that, pretty good
schedule
July 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
worst story EVER!
schedule
July 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am surprised you made Harry wait. I mean I get his point and with his position and his relationship it makes sense that he isn\'t the normal teenager. But still he is in the same room with his girlfriend for three weeks and you lead us to beleive that nothing naughty happened. I think we should have a flashback that shows us where Kara helped define the limits of her and Harry\'s relationship.
gallandro_83
gallandro_83
schedule
July 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
well how does this turn out. I am interested to know just how Hogwarts will bring any surprises to Harry\'s life.
Also it seems odd that you introduce this women and tell us something odd will happen, I had a theory which doesn\'t seem apropriatw. Ow. One was that this women would fall in love with a teacher, and break Harry\'s heart. I can\'t wait to see how she will play more in the story.
I do wonder if this will actually cover all of harry\'s year or just some scenes dealing with his poly-magus training.
gallandro_83
Also it seems odd that you introduce this women and tell us something odd will happen, I had a theory which doesn\'t seem apropriatw. Ow. One was that this women would fall in love with a teacher, and break Harry\'s heart. I can\'t wait to see how she will play more in the story.
I do wonder if this will actually cover all of harry\'s year or just some scenes dealing with his poly-magus training.
gallandro_83