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by Milkmaidbonny

schedule September 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
hi
person Ashley Malfoy
schedule December 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nine inches huh? Harry should be in a porno...wait a second...lol
person anonymous
schedule December 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I don\'t think you realize that no self-respecting 25 year old is giong to have a relationship with a teenage boy. There\'s a lot of things women want, but an eight year lead on your boyfriend isn\'t one of them.
person Ansh
schedule November 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
later today. is it a joke. Its been 4 weeks since you wrote that. hurry up!!
person dido
schedule October 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well, this could be interesting if you checked your spelling and grammar and got rid of some physical impossibilities. OK Harrry is blessed down e, Ie, I can go with that, but his lover taking his 9 inch cock fully in her mouth!!! There's a logistical problem there. Is she part giant? I dare you try this at home.
Is Harry's nickname Lighting or Lightning? Either way the sentence 'What is lighting?' is a question about electrical power in some form, not a question for Harry. It should be,'What is, lighting?'
person gaul1
schedule October 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I remember this story. I'm glad you will be continuing it.

gaul
person Patrick
schedule October 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
how could you stop there finish finish finish!
person Anon
schedule October 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
when are you writing the next chapter. I'm desperate. you're great
person Ansh
schedule August 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
great story. I really like it. You\'ve got to finish the next chapter soon and don\'t keep it clean. Make Harry lose his virginity in the next please.
person redsugg
schedule July 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think you have an interesting story going but you need to get a beta reader if you want me to be your beta reader i would be more than happy to help just email me ok.