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for Suspicions and Pride

by WildeOscar

person amniarix
schedule August 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nice plot development happening so far, this has potential, I'm looking forward to seeing where you go from here.
person Bambu
schedule August 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a lovely teaser and hook.... You\'ve clearly set them up as adversaries and your Hogwarts setting is visual, graphic, and clear. The tiny magical details are lovely and add an extra dimension to the story, rounding it out into a satisfying read. I look forward to the journey.
person Pallas
schedule July 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I don\'t know where you\'re taking this, but please continue!!
person Pallas
schedule July 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like this story too! You managed to make me curious to what Draco is really thinking and what his problems are... Update soon!
person Lexie
schedule July 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi! I really like your story. It\'s well written, and its hard to find those kinds of fics lately. I love your Draco. Still evil, but only when the trio especially Hermione are pissing him off. I love that he is quiet and brooding. Lthatthat type of Draco. I hope you post the next chapter soon. I know this fic is only taking off buwoulwould love to get a clearer idea of what the premise of this fic is.
person ~DM~
schedule July 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ok, now this one, I will read. :) I\'m not big on HP fics in general, but this story looks very good. Never trust a Malfoy as far as you can throw him. ;)
person owleyes
schedule July 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Interesting start, plenty of detail (liked the snogging in Filch
person Apollonia
schedule July 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Interesting beginning. Please continue! :)