rate_review Reviews

I love this story so so SOOOO much! Seriously, it is so good. You've got the characterization of the characters down pat, especially Snape!!!! I also love how you add the occasional joke or bit of sarcasm that makes me laugh! Anyway, I LOVE this story, and I LOVE you for writing it. :)

can't laugh for fear....*giggle giggle*... famliy comes over...*giggles to where she almost can't breathe* Update soon please and thank you.

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I really really like your use of Dom!Remus. Although it would be nice to see Harry get the upper hand, just once. Maybe. Hm.
anyways, nice chapter, as always.

Ha! With an ending like that you\'ll never be banned from ff.net again! Well, for rating reasons, anyway...why DO they ban people? whatwhat I didn\'t get to say there was that the paradox of making their mess physically, but really purifying the Black bedroom, is the kind of thing that makes me wish these stories were publishable! Oh and Harry\'s \"fishing for compliments\" comment is great. The smut is definitely a success, perhaps more than the last chapter, but it\'s good when they get witty in the middle of it, especially when Harry is cheerful. Thanks for helping to fill in the great hole that is Remarry fiction!

that was really hot!
thanks ;-)

Okay, I reviewed enough on ff.net, so I\'ll just say here that the smut may be your first, but it\'s HOT! Wow, I can\'t believe I have the nerve to say that. I feel like I should actually donate now! Not to you, of course--you\'re not supposed to make any money, even though one might really wish to give people that incentive--but to this site. Write more! Please! You can always change it, but you write so well!
Elizabeth

oh come on you just can\'t end like that please for the love of whatever god there is write more !!!

That was nice! I like this ficcie, it\'s very nive and cute:) Now, did it work? Whats next? Want to know, yay!

I\'m begging you... Please, please, please update....

Wow, he ohe only thing I can really think at the moment, this is one of the most best pieces of RL/Hp I\'ve come across. It\'s well thought out, has all the parts a good story needs, and your grammer and spelling are good. I really hope to see some more of this story very soon. The only thing I would think about if I where you, you might want to change the name, it may give you more readers, and you might wish to post this story on some better sites, not that thereanytanything the matter with aff but a lot of readers don\'t like looking through what they call \"crap\" to find the dimonds in the rough.