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for Winner Takes All

by Inell

person anjellic
schedule July 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Keep writing!!!! I can\'t wait to see what happens!
person annofmidnight
schedule July 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Really wonderful fic Inell. Damn! I\'m freaking out! I sincerely hope you stay inspired.
person cali
schedule July 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG... i love this so much. naughty Hermione is so much fun to read about. i really want to see more... you have got to update soon, please?!?!
person Slytherin Sneer
schedule July 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a great fic.Its so well written and captivating.It was just now that I realized,you\'ve written the majority of my favorite fanfics and I wanted to say thanks for writting all this cool,kinky,raunchy goodness.lol
-Slytherin Sneer
person Slytherin Sneer
schedule July 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a great fic.Its so well written and captivating.It was just now that I realized,you\'ve written the majority of my favorite fanfics and I wanted to say thanks for writting all this cool,kinky,raunchy goodness.lol
-Slytherin Sneer
person Apollonia
schedule July 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love this story! I wonder who is going to win Hermione. :P It would be nice if they called a draw and shared her. That would be cool. Anywho, love the fic as always and can\'t wait for the next installment. ;)
person moony_reader
schedule July 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AHHHH! Inell, that last chapter was so freaking hot! I love that you described the friction of Hermione against Blaise and then of Blaise against the bed; most authors forget to mention friction, and textures and exact sensations in sexy scenes and instead simply focus on the acts. Thank you for not being like so many others! Please keep incorporating those types of descriptions in your writing; it definitely adds to the heat of you can relate to the sensations being described. In addition, I loved how in the Draco/Hermione scenes you had Hermione take control and throw Draco off his game. I will admit that I am a big fan of the sub Draco/ dom Hermione dynamic, but unfortunately it\'s very rare. Can I request that you please have Hermione employ some more sexually aggressive moves on Draco? *wink, wink* I just love the idea of Draco being turned on, but slightly confused :D. And lastly, you are doing a wonderful job on this story. It\'s sexy and touching and interesting. I can\'t wait to read \"Wednesday.\" Thanks again for all of your hard work. It is sincerely appreciated.
person emma
schedule July 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
totaly awesome ,cant wait for the next chapter
person niki
schedule July 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Once again an exellent chapter !!! I really can\'t wait for the next update !! This has to be one of my favorite stories by far ! You are an exellent writer !!! I can\'t wait to see what Draco and Blaise do next , better yet I can\'t wai see see all three of them together !! That should be some scene !!!!
person Steph
schedule July 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I really didn\'t expect this fic to be good, and I am really impressed. Your charactization of Draco is fantastic. Most people tend to change characters, to fit into their stories, but Draco mantained some of the traits that make Draco, Draco. I should also comment of Blaise as he has become a common characto uto use as a OC, because all we know is the name. Normally, I don\'t like Blaise being in fics since people draw up a character that doesn\'t seem to fit any description of a slytherin that we haven\'t encountered much. But the way you have described Blaise as being a shy skinny kid is exellent. I reallly like him now! : D

I hope to see updates soon!

Oh, and I like how you renamed the chapters, and cleaned it up a bit. Keep it up!