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February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It IS a good story so far and I do hope that you continue, it really deserves to continue and soon.
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January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Its good so far. interesting plot line, the lemon scene is pretty good, though, its a bit short in description, so 2 speak, but its still a great story and I hope that you can update soon.
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January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very nice, that has all the components of an excellent 1st chapter, i will be really impressed if you can write a normal work of fiction with sex in it becuase not many people are able to do that effectively.
Update soon
Update soon
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August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice
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August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey nice story,well the beginning anyway I can\'t wait to see what happens next.Be sure to update soon
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July 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well I loved the first chapter, the sex was alittle short but for harry being a first timer its natural. I should know. But from now on I hope for more longer \'private moments\' between the two
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July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good story
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July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Meh. It was rather fast and a little forced, but okay. The sex scene could have been a bit better, but still, really good. If you had just wrote \"Harry and Fluer fucked,\" i\'d still say that\'d be better than over half of the crap populating this area of adultfan. Blasted slash.
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July 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i like it its great write more quick
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June 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good chapter, can\'t wait for an update..