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by Shadowface

person jay21317
schedule June 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hmm good story id suggest an update tho
schedule June 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
How old are you? I'm 18 and am heading to college this fall so I can understand the parents thing...sorta... I mean do they check your computer or something? N e way that was really good. i hope hermione is jealous and it turns out fleur used her powers on him and now he's stuck. Possible threesome... good work!!! And safe writing!
schedule June 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
How old are you? I'm 18 and am heading to college this fall so I can understand the parents thing...sorta... I mean do they check your computer or something? N e way that was really good. i hope hermione is jealous and it turns out fleur used her powers on him and now he's stuck. Possible threesome... good work!!! And safe writing!
schedule February 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I wish you would update this story. Thanks.
schedule February 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is a really good story. I hope that you will post again soon.
person Anon
schedule December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
2 years is a long time! When are you going to update?
person Cancan227
schedule October 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Soon please!!!
person noylj
schedule October 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I hope you "come" back to this story. The world needs all the Harry/Fleur stories it can get and I can't find very many.
It has been two years or so now.
person marcelhm
schedule September 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great story nice touches in the bonding ceremony like the marks on their cheeks and the memmorie sharing, thid mskes a great base for a very intimate relationship in future chapters. my only advice would be to try and slow your writing down, don't just rush to the core of the chapter in this case fleur and harry bonding, (anticipation is half the fun afterall ;)
person Anon
schedule June 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
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its such a great story update asap