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for The Imperfect Ser Series

by Devon

person spyke
schedule April 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
can\'t wait to read some more
person chocs
schedule July 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well, well, well...I am quite intrigued! Please do go on. This seems like a very good beginning to a very good story! An epic you say, I sure hope so!!!
person LupinsLover
schedule July 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ooooo....ok I\'ll bite, what was the look that Ron gave Harry?? I\'m intrigued. I like that they are not going to be jumping into bed right off or even in the third chapter. I\'m glad that you are going to take your time with the love stuff. I admit to being a little slow about the whole 3 part 15 chapter thing. Oh well, all straightened out now.:) Can\'t wait for more. Please update soon.
P.S. Dumbledore playing Snap is priceless.
person The Queen of the Damned
schedule July 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Looks great, I can\'t wait for the next chapter. Lol. It\'s cool to read a story which doesn\'t go that *fast*, if you know what i mean. Great job so far! ;)
person Vale
schedule July 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think your writing style is amazing. I cannot wait to read more.
person Sailor Black 666
schedule July 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story! I loved how Dumbledore tricked them twice in Snap . . . LOL! I cant wait for this story to get more interesting! Please post the next chapter soon!
person Demitria Miriam
schedule July 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Marvelous. I seriously love this so far. You said this whole \"epic\" is going to be like 35 Chapters? Merlin... Well, I suppose I can relate, mine\'s about 19 chapters so far (HPSRH) and it\'ll be going to about 40... Crap, that\'s a lot. Anyway. I hope you update soon! I like it. Lots!
person Sailor Black 666
schedule July 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What are you just going to leave the story like that?! But it could get intersting! Well heres hoping you do write more to this story!
person LupinsLover
schedule July 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'m intrigued and I want more. I like itot. ot. I really like the style of your writing. At first I read that it would be three parts and of epic proportions and I was thinking wow three chapters how epic. Then I read 15 chas a s a piece. If they are all as good as this first one then I can\'t wait. Please continue!! :)
P.S. Do you have the story already written or are you making it up as you go?? Just curious.
person DM
schedule July 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
GAH! And hI waI was expecting all of it! Bah. More, more, more! If you don\'t... I\'ll cry!! *whimpers*

Sinfully Yours,
Demitria Miriam