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Poor Harry... having to go through all that! At least his friends are there for him and his main man Draco. How is this going to all end? Happly ever after seems too good doesn\'t it? Oh well great writing! Stop by my story some time. Site: Harrypotterfanfic.com. My story \"6th year explorations\" by ziona2000. I would also love to have some feed back if you have time. thanks kitty

I am enjoying your story and looking forward to see what happens next. However, you probably neeed to read it at least one more time during your editing or your beta does. Sometimes you use the wrong word or overuse adectives such as \'anticipating fingers\' - your fingers do not anticipate, you anticipate. A better way to say it would be \'he reached for it eagerly\' or \'he reached for it nervously\', whatever emotion you are most trying to portray. Don\'t let your adjectievs get away feom you. Anyway, good luck and I can\'t wait to see who is in the hallway.

As glad as I am that Seamus is expelled, how could that be without Harry\'s testimony? That just seems a bit too easy. The scene between Harry and Draco was wonderful and a great counterpoint to all the lies, deception and angst that has occurred. I look forward to see if Blaise gets what\'s coming to him.

i am reading this on fanfiction.net as well and i love it! i hate posting on ff.net so i stopped but i love posting on here but ill probably keep reading it on ff.net but hey please keep going. remember from my laevieeview on ff i stayed up past midnight reading your story knowing i had to get up early!

Go Malfoy help Harry out! But is Harry going to be mad? I guess I will have to wait and find out! Please post the next chapter soon!

Loved every word you wrote. OOOoooohhh poor Harry! I hope Draco and Ron beat the shit out of Seamus. Urgh! and that Blaise too... oh and don\'t forget Cho, stupid chick!

Yay they are back together ^.^! Seamus is soooo going to be a dead man in the morning! *evil grin* Can I help kill him?! It was a great chapter! Please post the next chapter soon!

O.K. new reviewer here. I just read the whole story. It was really good. I think Harry and Ron need to talk though. And Cho needs to get whats coming to her. BAD. Anyways I will be checking EVERY DAY for an update, don\'t let me down!

It is nice to see the two of them together, but Seamus really needs to be put in his place. No one should get away with what he did to Harry.

grr grr mad extreme. freakin\' seamus and blaise. bastards!!