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for ORIGINAL: The Amour

by Manhattan

person Malya
schedule August 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Just wondering, I got to about the 7th chapter and it seems as if chapters are missing. For instance Harry gets hit with a bludger and Dracos all OMG! And then Harry's waking up in the infirmy and there no mess as to what happened. What did happen? Did they have sex? Did they jerk each other off? The who's prt seems to be missing. And then in chapter 8 the beginning he's saying something about running out of the dining hall; did he break up with Cho? I am very confused.
schedule January 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Whats with chapter 4 and 7 are they meant to be that short???? if not then u need to re upload them or something if so then chapter 5 and 8 are very hard to follow because of the sudden unmentioned events
person Anooka_Stormcrow
schedule August 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Please tell me that is not the end! I do see that you have a part two that takes place 8 years or so, but what about the war?? Do we get to know what happens during the war? I do hope that you will post sometime along those lines in this story! And dude by the way, this story kicks ASS!
person ziona2000
schedule August 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just got goose bumps all over....*shiver!!* The big war! So Cool!! Hope that's what your sequel is about. (and not Mpreg - ugh) great story through and through!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! - ziona
person Sailor Black 666
schedule August 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow that was an interesting chapter! A lot of things happened in this chapter! So now the war is started! And what happened to Draco? And is this the end of the story! Sequel . . . . ooooo thats got to be interesting! I cant wait to see what you are going to do!
person Melagic
schedule August 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG! How could you leave it like that?! Please make the next chapter soon, I hope it's a good and long one too.
person gloriousgentry
schedule August 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I hate you! I love you! You are a clever bastard. My heart almost stopped when you ended that scene with Voldemort aiming an avada at Draco, then you turned Blaise into a hero , then you started a good smut filled scene and had it interrupted by Ron and Hermione! What are you trying to do, kill me? Please update soon. I\'m begging you!

Gloriousgentry
person Sailor Black 666
schedule August 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow alot happened in the last 2 chapters! I need to know what is going to happened! Please post the next chapter soon!
person Jesonte
schedule August 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Bonjour, bonjour...I just finished your entire fic today (all 16 chapters!) and enjoyed it immensely (why else would I waste my entire day, haha) and I do hope that you can update soon. You have alot of talent; keep writ~Au ~Au Revoir~
person Sailor Black 666
schedule August 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Who is it that found Harry?!? It was a great chapter! I need to know what is going to happen next! Please post the next chapter soon!